Subnotae, Vol. I
poems written in passing
This series convenes poems — first composed as Substack notes — in response to the ideas, images, and provocations circulating among the platform’s writers and visual artists.
I hope here they’ll assume a more deliberate form: fragments registering my poetic motion, perception, and dialogues of literary exchange.
Scribbles
A Sub-stack submerge sublimate subrosa subjunctive subaudible subsist subtilize subfloor submersion subfusc subterranean subdivide subsidiary subtext subroutine subscript substation subzero
12.08.25
overdueoverdoover dew
01.15.26
Haiku
babies write haikus on high chairs in applesauce testcross Parnassus
01.08.26
Do not fall tonight— moth-winged vice flitting sinew, walnut split necrose
01.13.26
I cherish you all
but one more haiku today
and lobes
will
hemorrhage01.13.26
announcing time off Substack is weird. I’ll Irish g’bye you in haiku
01.23.26
Ekphrasis
Chill writes in sixes
in six steady hands
repeats decisions made at center:
temperature, pressure, time—
a record of air, born to collapse
on impact.12.08.25
Crystallofolia
hoarfrost sutures needles
by adhesion,
not will
rime tensile as polymers
xylem mired
sap vitrified
from dormant cambium
ochre tufts breach
crust, like papilla12.23.25
Solstice
light reaches perigee of absence
photons waver, return—
an axial mercy
by fractions only patience discerns12.22.25
hygge
pastel
townhome‑pupa
quadrilateral
chrysalide
gables in
kanaler double
lattice
unravel
like
polyamide01.04.26
ruby-throated
green comma
hovers at bleeding heart
bill to corolla,
combing nectar
anthers dusting gorget
eighty-beat seconds,
high-voltage hymnal
on the sill, a notched
mug warm enough
to still be yours01.05.26
Mélusine
Gadwalls quarter everted brink
culmen to culmen, tarsus to talus
Her silhouette—Salcedo’s negative space,
Vermeer’s pupil, vein-limned calyx,
Chiaroscuro framed in white01.12.26
Rörelse
filaments
writhe
in loam
fen
sediment
fog
fissure
flensing
bone-dry
husked
dragonfly
nymph
mist
sieves
sphagnum
mica-wink
in
pericarp
plica
cattail
spires
scraping
gold-patina,
amphibian
mask01.22.26
8 phases in 8 phrases I Crescent — 3° luminous, terminator acute II Waxing — 23° bulge, simulacrum compressed III First Quarter — 50%, planar rive IV Gibbous — 78%, convex camber V Full — 100%, albedo zenith, isotropic gilt VI Waning Gibbous — 82%, kinetic decay VII Last Quarter — 50%, rendered hemicycle VIII Crescent — 7°, vestigial quantum spatter
01.16.26
Suffering
Both Ends
**BIC**
**wick**
**flicker**
**flare**
|
forty hour
corporate
jargon
iterative
deck
approval
verbs
furbished
*flame*
*downward*
invoice
inbox
kop
for hire
—
when I’m quiet
I’m not empty
—
muteness
means
mutability
mouthfuls
of labor
—
after hours
second wick
covert
combust
pro bono
paean
similia
tallow
*flame*
*upward*
georgics
smolder
shunning
slumber
|
**BIC**
**wick**
**flicker**
**flare**


Just spent an hour this morning reading comments and soaking in all the collective feelings from readers. You took it to a whole different level. It's so nice to have real feedback we can apply in outr writings from notes.
I love this!
I write my own poems in Notes and I keep thinking to compile them into a newsletter post every once in awhile.
But I like your take on it, writing poems from viewing other people’s notes. It’s a very circular process here! (There will restacks … ) ☺️👏👏👏👏👏